Reviews For The relization
Title: The relization Reviewer: retarded13 Signed
Kudos to you for trying. Don't stop. Practice makes perfect!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 01:17 am [Report This]
Title: The relization Reviewer: ineedtobleedit Signed
Need to work on spelling and grammar. The way it was told seemed a bit unrealistic and too rushed to let the plot unfold in a graceful way. Maybe in your next fic, try to stretch things, don't give too much away at once, especially when dealing with issues like infidelity and love triangles. Good work, you have potential.
Date: 31 May 2009 05:54 am [Report This]
Title: The relization Reviewer: twat Anonymous
spellin n grammer leave much to be disired. the storyline has potentiasl but needs elabortion to come to live/
Date: 29 May 2009 09:10 am [Report This]