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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: TheCatInTheTree Signed
maked me cry

Author's Response: Thank you ^^
Date: 28 Sep 2008 02:28 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: fairylights Signed

Don't you think your characters are just a bit over sensitive? Ignoring the fact that Westminster Abbey doesn't have a graveyard for the moment, I find it entirely unrealistic that someone would go skulking around their parents' graves in the middle of the night years after they died. I speak from personal experience in this matter.

Your typing and spelling also need more work.

Author's Response: i'm sorry if this offended you, but it's not really based on any real life experiences people might have. besides, i think this is fine so i'm not changing it. thanks for your comment anyway though :)
Date: 18 May 2008 04:35 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: munkee Anonymous
OMG that made me cry so sad im almost angry they died in this but it was so beautifuly written i can't be and awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww XD

Author's Response: thank you so much ^^
Date: 18 May 2008 11:23 am [Report This]
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