finally, the A, B or C options at the end of each page are really off-putting and ruin the mood & suprise - might wanna get rid of them sharpish.
amazing plot though babe, really realistic and lovely. good luck x x x x x x
I love it from beginning to end.
Thank you for this beauty.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you :D
Great to start.. but just got skank at the end
I'm sorry you feel that way about the end, since you liked the start, but the fic is rated NC-17, it really shouldn't have come as a surprise. These are works of fiction, so the fact that they have girlfriends or kids really shouldn't matter, because it's supposed to be fantasy. I must admit I'm surprised you're even reading fics on this site if you find the idea of Noel and Julian having sex with each other sick.
Thanks for the review nonetheless.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks a lot!
Author's Response: Thanks very much ^_^
I think I'll have to go with... hm... B. I think that seems the most likely to have a happy ending!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: Drugs most definitely are bad.
The voting for this took place on the LiveJournal community, where it was posted orginially, as I said at the beginning of the story. I'm really only archiving it here. I chose to post it with the options at the end to show what could have happened had the votes gone differently.
I'm very glad you've been enjoying it so far!
I must admit, I'm very frustrated with how Noel's been acting in this story. I'm writing the last part now and I'm afraid I'm taking it out on him a little bit :P
Thank you very much!
The windmill is pobably my favourite part of this whole story, ahaha.